10 Responses

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  Sylvie April 10, 2011 6:15 pm

  Beautiful, Scarlett! {clap}
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  Scarlett DuBois April 14, 2011 8:22 am

  Thanks alot Sylvie =D Your also the first person ever to rate my work, thanks again.

  Love,

  Scarlett x
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  crazyfrogc1 April 22, 2011 6:21 am

  Lol just something I wrote awhile back looking for other poets around.

  A Sparkling Eye

  Lights, reflections, sound, glimmering off the walls. The chaotic pace of thoughts floating to the air. People talking, whispering, dancing, flying among each other rapidly dancing. The music as if it were in you, making you dance, making you move as if you were drunk but quicker and more precise. The beats ecstatic and loud and pounding in your ears like your heart beat speeding down a road like a racecar. Then you see that one girl, that one girl you love, you ask for a dance and when she says yes you go on the dance floor and then the slow song starts and you stare in her eyes and you realize there could be no other girl you could be with. You flow with the slow sound of love, the slow sound like a river flowing soundly by. You smile, you blush, and then you realize things couldn’t get better. Her smile like a radiating light around both of you guides you through the flow of the song, the thought of graciousness we all have in our hearts. Her hair shimmers like that of a heavenly angel lit by the lights but dim and beautiful. Your hands around her waist you flow as if you were meant to be with her. You come closer to her and kiss her and when you look in her eyes this time you see a spark, a glimpse that she loves you to. Then the music starts to slowly die and reality comes back but you still remember that one girl, that one that you will for the rest of your life. Suddenly you realize that it truly was that one girl, the one that you truly love, closely with all your life and you won’t let her go for a long time. Slowly though that memory will die down but there will always be that thought of that night. In the end none should forget it.

  Haha there are other ones but they are either sad or slow
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  Scarlett DuBois April 22, 2011 11:47 am

  Hi Crazyfrogc1 (Nice name by the way, lol.)

  That’s a really lovely Poem! I’m always looking for other Writers and Poets to share and discuss with. Thanks for sharing your Poem on my blog, if you leave your blog address or where ever it is you share your other pieces of writing, well I would really like to have a look at it and I’m sure many of my followers will also.

  Thanks again and keep in touch!

  Love,

  Scarlett x
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  Amel Anniza April 30, 2011 4:34 am

  aahh, i love this one! good job! write more like this! <3

  also, thanks for visiting my blog
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  B May 5, 2011 8:12 am

  I like this one! very descriptive. and the picture too!
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  Scarlett DuBois May 6, 2011 1:14 pm

  Hey Amel & B!

  Thanks so much you guys!

  I like to add photo’s and pic’s that help people to visualise what I’m talking about more, as I know some people find it hard. So I think it helps and I will try to write more like this, lol!

  Thanks for reading!

  Love,

  Scarlett x
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  Malika Rod July 9, 2011 2:30 am

  great post, very informative. I wonder why the other specialists of this sector don’t notice this. You should continue your writing. I am sure, you’ve a huge readers’ base already!
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  Nancy October 3, 2011 10:51 am

  Thanks for the share!
  Nancy.R
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  Lily-Alice Wolf December 28, 2011 4:50 pm

  I know that this is probably an old post by now, however, I love this poem. I do hope that the work you are posting is copy-wrighted and protected? It would be awful if someone plagarised your work! As you really do deserve credit and recognition for this.

  Seriousness aside, this is a beautiful poem! I really do love this, and I hope to see more of your work soon. I would love to see more poems about the moon, as it has always fascinated me, as I am sure it has many others.

  Keep writing! (as a fellow aspiring author, I know feedback and encouragment is always appreciated)

  Lily,<3